All Comments on 'Fire in the Night Ch. 08'

by sunnylynn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Work !

The charecters are believable, the action great. But going from cliff hanger to cliff hanger is torture. Next installment please !

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What are you doing to us?

You are writing one heck of a story. You seem to be getting better as you go on. The tension and emotion are draining, but worth it. I can't wait for the next installment. Stay with your writing, because you are very talented.

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