All Comments on 'First Date Submission Slut'

by BostonDom55

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redyellowgoredyellowgoalmost 11 years ago
I don't know why really...

but I am loving your style of writing.

I read all three so far and can not say which is best this or spanking/fetish. Though I hope that it is a true story for the ballet one. Though clearly a male voice your write like a man. Confident, you know where you are going with each action and have had the experience to know that is possible in each situation. I look forward to your next set of submissions. Oh by the way I usually do not point this out and am sorry to do so but there were at least three grammar/spelling errors I found in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
That

Made me really wet. Thanks, friend. ;)

BostonBorn2000BostonBorn2000about 3 years ago
mmmm

That was hot. Being spanked was taking a man deep down is so arousing.

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