by Deadwood
I really enjoyed your story... but who are Jennifer and Cynthia? I got a bit confused when the characters names changed half way through the kiss?? Also, John is spelt in two different ways and there are question marks where they don't seem to belong. Please edit a bit more carefully. Otherwise - a great story with an interesting veiw - matching pain w/ pleasure.
I imagine that, had Leslie gotten arrested, the police that escorted her would have been fired too, right?
As a resident of Laconia, I am sorry that she didn't come here for Bike Week. Don't worry about the anonymous comment that criticizes your writing. He misspelled spelled as spelt in just four lines of text.