All Comments on 'First Love'

I like the realism of it, and how you write from the inside of a girl's head. Especially appreciate the message at the bottom. Go you!

Start.

Need to run spell & grammer check.

Nice story, please continue.

Loved it!

A virgin knew something was going to happen as she was shown all aspects of love as the man romanced her and finally entered her. Her very being told her on each step to stop, yet allowed her body to over ride her knowledge that she must stop what was occurring to her. You made this an interesting story and it was like it was for real. Hope you add to this story.