All Comments on 'First Meeting'

by jeb22

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bobbycull55bobbycull55over 1 year ago

Pleasant read; Glad that Dana's stress was relieved. There should be a "follow-up"

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 9 years ago
Dominant Males...

are not usually my cup of tea! This story has possibilities! Well thought out. Needs a serious editing but otherwise it kept my attention.

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I appreciate everyone's feedback from the stories and hope you enjoy them. It is hard for me to write patiently at times and I know sometimes there are errors in grammar or spelling as I tend to rush through some parts. The moments I get caught up in the most tend to come ou...