by rantfor
Looking forward to reading more from this author! A Five star story all the way.
Thanks for the comment. I am especially interested in hearing feedback from women. Is this your kind of story? Was it arousing? Did I get anything really wrong? I think most men don't write well about women's emotions, so feedback from women helps.
Great Story…. Having just read and commented on your Majorca/ Mallorca story, everything I said about that is true of this story too. I loved it! It reminds me a bit of a story of mine ‘On the Deck’.
You asked in your comment above for responses from women. Id be fascinated to learn if you have had any responses to the questions you raised, as I ponder the same questions!