by Gudzinya
Pretty fun and funny. Definitely quick and to the point. You described it how I imagined a guy his age would describe sex.
Had you put in more detail, I probably would have thought you a woman. lol (joke).
Don't you all just love it when assholes who think they can write let alone read, hide behind the "Anonymous" moniker when spitting on someones work?
I liked the story simply because with the average ignorant college age kids that are around today, the interaction between the two main characters seemed very real and life like. I would love to read more in this series!
The only word missing in this story was "Axe" as in let me AXE you a question!
I think that the two Anon's who pissed on this story simply did so because the characters remind them of themselves way too much.