All Comments on 'First Visit to the Salon'

by bilbo181

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A wonderful story, i hope my first visit is so

This is a wonderful story and similar in how i would love to experience my first visit to a dungeon. Thank you for your writing, please write more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Beautiful

You have an excellent way with words. I have enjoyed reading your stories. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fool

He asked for that? No way, no how, never. Stand up, boot the Mistress in her ass and leave. Grow a pair.

ProfDavrosProfDavrosabout 11 years ago
Wonderful 'submission'

An interesting story, told in a way that captures both the action and feelings involved.

The realism makes me wonder if this is your fantasy or a memoir?

It is very close to my first experience in the scene including the trepidation in approaching the salon.

More please!

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