All Comments on 'Firsts Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
MUAH...........

Love it Love it.........

Continue................................

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I'm hungry for moooooore!

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Brilliant

Except that it was too short, more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
too short!

but still fabulous...please make the next submission longer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
SIGH

Has the makings of an excellent story. Nice Flow. Keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome!

I'm not sure how this would be made longer, which is a sign of a good length.

It's important to have trouble, even in stories.

And equally important for relationships to be mended without sex.

Bravo! Wonderfully done, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
WOW!

Loved it, just the right length to leave us in suspense.

Please write more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Can't wait...

To read more! I thought the length was perfect in leaving us in suspense.

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