by TheKiss
To read more! I thought the length was perfect in leaving us in suspense.
Loved it, just the right length to leave us in suspense.
Please write more soon.
I'm not sure how this would be made longer, which is a sign of a good length.
It's important to have trouble, even in stories.
And equally important for relationships to be mended without sex.
Bravo! Wonderfully done, thank you!
Love it Love it.........
Continue................................