All Comments on 'Flowers in the Heart'

by JimBob44

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

absolutely loved this story. not very often I'll read a story this long but I was engrossed and couldn't wait to see what happened next. Wish you hadn't ended it the way you did and left it open to possibly another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Dude ... You're like the Jeffery Archer of erotic literature . Like most of your stories , this one , too , is AWESOME .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Rockin Good

You're the master, dude!!

ElizabethOliverfieldsElizabethOliverfieldsalmost 12 years ago

Transgender love, the most beautiful form of love in the world.

PryoHoundPryoHoundalmost 12 years ago
Incredible

I love this story, it is so sweet and loving. Also, i am kinda into Fauna. She small and cute, i don't mind the scar down her back, I love the wigs. Can you make some more like this? You are great with this one. Even the other story was good but I hated those girls, Teri, Megan, Connie. I am glad some of them got pregnant, but this story was hands down better for me.

LovelyLvsLovelyLvsover 11 years ago
cute!

very sweet! i'm glad Scotty could love Fauna for who she was! would have like to read more scenes with him touching her & giving her head... ;)

jenellesljenelleslover 11 years ago
A Lovely Romance

This is a wonderful romance. It's not that erotic but enough where it belongs. I liked that Scotty ran out when he learned. I think most guys would have. I also like that after he thought about it, he decided not to let genitals get in the way of love and happiness.

Keep up the good work. I'll be rereading this again to see an example of good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Another lowlife Pommy whom loves to read his mindless prattle !

Boring and incompetent. "1*" !

MikerpenMikerpenalmost 11 years ago
a story with a happy ending

A story with a happy ending! Fun to read. Nice character development and Fauna seemed like such a nice girl. Well done. Congrats to the author.

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 9 years ago
Excellent, but unpolished

Wonderful story, thoroughly lovable (or hateable) characters, and some pretty hot sex. However, there are typos throughout, and a positive infestation of run-on sentences. A story this good deserves to put its best foot forward, so I respectfully suggest getting it edited and re-posting it. :)

Still and all, bravo! Going to read Pt. 2 now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mindless prattle !

I see you still haven't learn how to write ! "1*" .

zetjester1zetjester1about 9 years ago
Great Stuff

A beautiful story, thanks

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgabout 9 years ago
Hey, If You Want Perfect...

...Grammar better head to a library. Personally I'd much rather have a perfected storyline, beautifully fleshed out characters you can really care about, and topped with empathy, love, and respect. Never went to Catholic school, but if I had I would hope for such a place. I will be looking for other works from this author, this was a wonderful surprise suggestion from zetjester1, loved reading about Fauna. Cheers! --- Josie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fauna (& Flora?)

Loved the story, not sure about the title though. Want to come up with a Flora and Fauna wordplay, just can't get there. I appreciated you giving overall happy endings.

jezchazaniajezchazaniaover 7 years ago
Beautiful Story

I take my hat of to you, a wonderful story and a great read.

Thank you so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Awesome story, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome

I loved every minute of reading it. I love happy endings!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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Sweet story that brought a tear to my eye in places.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great, but needs spell checking please “buil9ding” really come on

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Go Cindy!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ha a good story going till you let it be known it was a boy.

Really need to Give some warning for that kind of shit .

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