All Comments on 'Follow The Yellow Prick Road'

This is one of the more titillating stories I've read. And well written, too! Good job!

Very well written, nice set-up.

I've enjoy perusing Literotica for a few years now but have rarely come across such an original piece and so well written. Spelling, grammar, syntax - all clean and sharp. Story flows beautifully. Keep it up (no pun intended!)

I can just imagine this lot in action,how on earth did you think of it ?

On the stage with this sort of thing;sexy comical and highly entertaining