by petertowers
You did a great job of adding a lot more definition to the roles of your characters giving them a lot of depth. You also have set up a lot of possibilities for future chapters which I hope we get to read someday. Excellent job. I also like how my story is fading into the background as yours has it's own plot lines to follow. Very creative and original. You also have some of your best descriptions in this chapter. Thanks.
I hope to read that he has a threesome with mom and Maria.
Thanks for the good read
Really nice, thanks again. I'm glad they're actually fucking now and I'm really looking forward to a lovely thressome with Maria. Keep it up!
I loved the twists and turns of lusty ambition, including a few twists and turns. I must say that the plot lines were truly outstanding. And of course, thank you!
Now tell me... do you have another story up your writer's sleeve that can outdo this one?! I sure hope so!
I'm glad to see them get together. Can't wait to see him take charge of both women. Looking forward to more.
I enjoy reading the details of the story! You keep me aroused for the entire story. I stroked my hard cock throughout the whole story! Keep writing!
Loved it - almost perfect.
Since he already came 4/5 times it would have been cool for him to passively watch his mom draw it out of him as she got herself off riding his cock.