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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice concept...

...but I was put off by the incestuous relationship. Should have been labelled as such, IMHO, though there is the fantasy aspect of it.

Still, it was sort of like a couple of ideas I've had floating in my own head for a while.

Richard1940Richard1940over 1 year ago

A very ingenious plot and well written. I don't think I've ever seen a story with three iterations of the same person present simultaneously

oldpantythiefoldpantythief4 months ago

Interesting twist on things, but still a good story. It's nice that Grandpa could rise to the occasion so to speak. Just wondering if he gets to deflower the younger Emily again when she gets near her 19th birthday? after all, she's still a baby in the crib right now so he has that to look forward to, or would this be a loop like Bill Murry in Groundhog Day? Guess it's a good thing we don't get to mess with time travel or things could sure get screwed up royally.

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I admit that I like plump women, but not supersize. There's more cusion, who wants to hug a skeleton? Perhaps this is from my long association with the SCA and a bit of time with the Renaissance Fair circuit. Or else I was drawn to those pursuits because I like plump women......

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