All Comments on 'For Every Crime There is a Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Good beginning. Your story needs longer and more action scenes, so you can draw us into what the slut is feeling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
mistress

males are to be used in any way we desire, keep it up .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well, too bad this was not continued. Very good start but would like to have more description of what happened while he was raped by the other guy. All we get was that it happened and his ass was sore.

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