All Comments on 'Forbidden Desires Released'

Would have been better with more build up

Would have been better with more build up

This is a good story with a great premise but I feel it needs more build-up before the climax to create tension and arouse the reader. You're a good writer; you just need to write more.

i hope you are happy, totaly disrespecting your sister and making a mockery of her marrige.

I wish you were my sister in law.

To long ago. Well written. Could have had more chapters, but kind of late now.