All Comments on 'Forced Into Change Ch. 01'

this shows promise ,i like where it is going ,please write the next chapter soon.x

GOOD START BUT I HOPE WE DONT FIND OUT IT WAS A MAN WHO DID THIS BUT A BISEX WOMAN WHO WANTS THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS SLIGHTLY FEMDOM BUT NOT TO MUCH HE NEEDS SOME SAY IN HIS NEW LIFE AND NOT JUST A PUPPET ON A LEACH

this sounds very interesting so far...I only wish your chapters were a little longer...that was a very quick read...but good...please continue...

Interesting start. You'll have to get used to readers pelting you with their fantasies for your story. As for myself, I just hope it doesn't get ugly for him.

wa really getting it and it ended quite abruptly. but I liked it and hope to see chapter 2 and hope you make it longer.

A waste of time. Why bother to put together a bunch of cliches? If this is the best you can do, it's not worth the effort, really.

good start keep it cumming

Very good start. Keep going. you are doing good

you have a chapter done before submitting. Can't give it more than a 3.

Interesting start I hope this story developes, and what direction will it take ?

I understand short stories but WTF? You don't tell us why him, who's idea need to expand. Was a good beginning for story!

wish this could happen to me

I always felt i was a women in a mans body.I set out to change that and found people to help me not to make fun of me.After two years i am now completely transformed in to the women i always knew i was.Hairless body slim waist firm butt silky skin long hair and best of all size 38d breast The first time my hair done eye shadow lashes face make up nails done and lip stick all done i looked like i knew i would.Now to dress a long line push up bra thong high waist eight garter garter belt and black ff seamed stockings with red six inch heels.Now for a red low cut spandex dress.I now was off to see what i could find for fun.