by Sir_Erotica
What a delightful and moving description of desire and fulfillment. Please delve back into her fantasies and tell us more. Whatever you do, don't stop.
I must say, it never ceases to amaze me that some people actually GO LOOKING FOR something they know they don't like so they can complain about it. Nobody is holding a gun to your head forcing you to read a story you don't like; if you start it and don't like it just read something else!
Anyway, the story itself was great. Please keep up the good work!
This was an excellent, well written story and a credit to the lifestyle. Do not let the immature child moron upset. This child has been bashing every author in here and why Literotica allows it to go on is beyond me.
I would like to see a sequel written and encourage you to do so.
And I wholeheartedly agree that you must do a second chapter!! It would be too much of a shame not to. Beautifully done!!
That was... incredible. Really. I feel as if my eyes have been opened.
ohhhhh please thrill us again!!!!! seldom have i read such a fantastic story. i was so able to put myself in the submissive's role and feel i was actually there. i saw what she saw, felt what she felt, every bit of it. it left me both wanton and wanting.
...for me to even venture into the BDSM story forum but if this is what I can expect, I will be coming back! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORYLINE!!!
I just discovered and read this story ... and loved it! I went to your profile hoping to find more to it, but, alas, no.
I'm hoping you will pick up this genre, and this story, again.