All Comments on 'Forgotten Choices'

Ut externally good

To arrange emergency resignation emails to her boss? When someone just up and disappears out of the blue, it's a red flag that someone nobody in the office has ever heard of or met before "resigns" on behalf of an employee. Unless he's got magical hacking skills in addition to being obscenely wealthy and rugby player physique, that should come back to bite him in the ass.

Please do continue!!!

please continue writing I loved it

I have just submitted the next chapter, which is a little longer than this one. I'm not sure when it will come out due to it being the holidays etc, and it may take longer for it to be approved.

in response to the comment about the problem with emergency resignation of the job, i agree that maybe it will come up later in the story, thankyou for pointing it out. The being rich and well built thing is something i hesitated to put into the story, and i will try and be more realistic whenever i can, but did not want these characters restrained by working times. Thanks for the feedback everyone :)