All Comments on 'Four Star'

great story on to the next as John Irving would say!

As you can imagine, I wanted it for her - wanted that marvelous cock bringing her to a glorious orgasm, the kind that every woman should have with regularity. To be honest, I was disappointed with the ending, because I was right there with them on that lighted front porch. To find Mrs. Pierson in fantasy land when I wanted for her to enjoy Tim fucking (no, making love to) her, was a real let down. As the older man fantasizing the younger woman who simply wanted to give herself to me, I have enjoyed the whole idea of older/younger.

Bottom line, I did enjoy your story.

I wanted to grab Edward and shake him, say "Wake up, dummy!" :)

I wanted her to find joy with Tim. Barring that, strip naked, grab a bat and wallop Edward a good one. Maybe he'd figure something out. ;)

Thanks for a great story!

I really enjoyed how I was sucked right into (forgive the pun) beleiving that Mrs. Pierson was enjoying Tim out on the porch and then delicately turned back to reality. Spot on, Min.

I wished it would of been real for her.