All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 12'

I love where this story is going, and I'm hoping it lasts for quite some more time. I appreciate the longer chapters, Maybe even submit longer sections as parts and separate the chapters within the text?

Just throwing that out there, because when I read one of your shorter chapters I always want to keep going

I can't imagine this debate with Fran being written any better. Your dialogue was perfect. Using Connie to prove the potion "story" was inspired. I loved Fran's scorn after first hearing James' story. At least James was able to get Fran to give up on the marriage demands. I much look forward to James' "confession" to Wendy and what the outcome of that might be. Six parts in the past week - keep them coming!!! Others have suggested longer chapters - I personally prefer my daily FIX of F.U.C.K.!!

Keep doing what you are doing. Keep us hanging.

:)

He really is stupid