All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 13'

hoped it would go this way

make this one a long lasting one !

I enjoyed how Fran's aggressive anger turned to adoring worship after the sex. I also feel that you handled the dialogue with Wendy very well. I guess that is what I like most about your story so far ... how you are able to write about ordinary, everyday scenes of life to make the "unreal" affects of the potion seem more likely and real.