by Londonchap
Your writing is terrific. Normally I come to this site to read about the sex, but this story has me wanting to see more every day. I can't wait until the prof arrives, to see if she succumbs or if she blows the whistle.
The buildup of tension is superb.
Bravo & keep 'em coming!
to compare himself with Henry Ford,Ford's cars were all black,whereas James's "cars"come in different colors and
come with different fender sizes.
FUN WRITING ON GABBY'S SERIOUSLY AGGRESSIVE DRIVING - GAVE THE STORY MORE OF A REALITY FEEL. LOVED YVONNE'S "FASTER" COMMENT WHEN ASKED ABOUT THE DRIVING. JAMES' PLANS FOR HIS "CUSTOMERS" WERE WELL WRITTEN - ABOUT THE ONLY REAL WAY JAMES COULD HANDLE THE INFLUX OF "PRIMED" VICTIMS. I LOOK FORWARD TO HOW WELL THESE PLANS WORK OUT AND WHAT LAURA STONE'S "VISIT" WILL DO TO THE PLANS.