All Comments on 'Freeze-Frame'

...a Mind Control story that's about consensual pleasure rather than revenge or reluctance. This is very, very well done; the writing is tight, the pacing good, nice transitions, and very believable characters, particularly so as several are basically just sketched. The only thing "wrong" with it is that it wasn't longer! Should you be moved to write a sequel or series, rest assured that you'll have at least one avid reader.

Interesting, stimulating... I want to come to the next party, please! Erotic hypnosis is delicious and I'm glad others have experienced the pleasure.

I hope more is on the way

well, darn it, im back again. i found it a little hard to follow at first, jumping between girls all the time. but hot as thanks jukebox