by rambleon
And the rest of the story as well. I hope we will get to read tales of some the subsequent nights of his stay, including the one where he gets to put something in her ass...
In France they say `etoile` for indicating a star. And `la nuit est noire`, because the word `nuit` is feminine. I did not read more than that, obviously you were never in France. I do, I live there. Not many French people speak english, like e.g. Chirac, if you know who that is. I am Dutch, by the way. Your imaginary visit must have been a confusing babel instead.
I liked it. Direct and honest. This story takes us to a different location, not exotic, but enough for spice. It nicely displays the universality of sexuality and yes, it plays on a few pre-conceptions that those of us in "The Colonies" still hold. But that's okay; pre-conceptions don't mean prejudice. Overall, I found it more enjoyable than if it had been 'Clever' to the point of pedantry.
One of the best stories on the site in a long time. Authentic, intelligent, hot. I wanted more from this writer after I read it.
It was a hot story, very sexy. I love the older woman/younger man theme and the take on it was just right.
The way it was written, I didn't like it and skipped some. Did they fuck? I gave it a low rating.
L'Etoile n'etait qu'une pute. Rien de plus, rien de froid. A French summary of your story.