by rambleon
L'Etoile n'etait qu'une pute. Rien de plus, rien de froid. A French summary of your story.
The way it was written, I didn't like it and skipped some. Did they fuck? I gave it a low rating.
It was a hot story, very sexy. I love the older woman/younger man theme and the take on it was just right.
One of the best stories on the site in a long time. Authentic, intelligent, hot. I wanted more from this writer after I read it.
I liked it. Direct and honest. This story takes us to a different location, not exotic, but enough for spice. It nicely displays the universality of sexuality and yes, it plays on a few pre-conceptions that those of us in "The Colonies" still hold. But that's okay; pre-conceptions don't mean prejudice. Overall, I found it more enjoyable than if it had been 'Clever' to the point of pedantry.
In France they say `etoile` for indicating a star. And `la nuit est noire`, because the word `nuit` is feminine. I did not read more than that, obviously you were never in France. I do, I live there. Not many French people speak english, like e.g. Chirac, if you know who that is. I am Dutch, by the way. Your imaginary visit must have been a confusing babel instead.
And the rest of the story as well. I hope we will get to read tales of some the subsequent nights of his stay, including the one where he gets to put something in her ass...