All Comments on 'Friendly Fantasy'

by AbsintheGrrl

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wdelanderwdelanderalmost 16 years ago
Just wonderful!

Very well written and very erotic

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Not Bad

To each their own, enjoy.

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
I really enjoyed this

You followed the golden rule of short story writing, keeping it simple. It was erotic and left things just at the right point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well Written

Threesomes can be the greatest!! This is a wonderful tale of just how good they can be.

Colin PearceColin Pearcealmost 14 years ago

Very well crafted and joyous piece of writing.

dylan_tdylan_tover 13 years ago
Oh Hell Yes!

Great fantasy!

loveloverloveloverabout 7 years ago
At first I didn't care

Then your writing drew me further & further in....

loveloverloveloveralmost 7 years ago
Weird

I loved it and got more and more turned on, incl by narrators mildly hypocritical shyness. Then I learned I'd been involved with your story before. Think I was hotter this time. They were right to drug and tie up this dumb bitch who loved and wanted them, and fuck her silly.

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