All Comments on 'Friendly Neighbors'

by Loves_music_loves_to_dance

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swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Not bad as an intro

If this is a first chapter, I'm on board. If it's the entire story, I'm disappointed.

Chapter Two: Ben and Jessie hit the lake, where she rides him on top of their jet ski as it skims across the water. They continue the party at Ben's house, and right as he's about to burst inside Jessie's mouth, wifey comes home. With renewed self-confidence and self-worth, Ben tells wifey to take a seat and let Jessie show her how it's done.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Clandestine

Naughty neighbours move on from talking to oral! Graphic and titillating with a hint of more furtive and ribald business to follow.

honey_licker1124honey_licker1124over 9 years ago
Great story!

These naughty neighbors deserve more chapters, and bitch wife Karla needs to be exposed for what she's doing out of town. 5 *'s on the erection scale. Good to see female writers in your age category on here.

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