All Comments on 'Friends?'

by RedHot_Lips

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DocSavage656DocSavage656almost 11 years ago
Good idea, poor writing.

I really wanted this to be a good little read, however the grammar and spelling errors were so bad I couldn't finish it. Please give it a read or have someone proofread your stories before sending them in..

Good idea, with a little practice you will get better.

Doc

Cookielove04Cookielove04almost 11 years ago
I really enjoy this story

I really loved the story and shit the grammar ut dont matter after u getting hot and bother, and yes this story made my pussy wet just reading it ;)

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