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Click hereI thought about what she said for all of two seconds before replying,
'Well, okay.'
'Okay?'
'Okay,' I repeated.
'Okay what?' she asked.
'Let's spend more time together,' I said, before adding, 'With and without clothes.'
She nodded furiously in agreement, a huge smile across her face. It was a sweet and tender moment that was in no way undermined by the fact we were still both stark naked. I decided to take advantage of the situation and swept aside the sheets and pulled her down onto the bed. My lips touched hers and my hands squeezed both perky breasts. I lowered my whole body onto hers, if only to feel her bare skin all along my body. I couldn't stop kissing her. She just laid there and gave me have free reign of her body. I kissed her lips again before moved to her breasts to give her nipples some attention. She enjoyed that.
Suddenly, for whatever reason, I noticed the clock read 8:00 am. After giving one last, hard suck of her nipple, I said,
'We need to checkout of the hotel soon. You should hop in the shower first though, get freshened up.'
'But I just had a shower. Look, my hair is still wet,' she said frustrated, clearly wanting me to continue.
'You're hair maybe. But you're not wet here,' I said as I slipped my hand between her thighs and slid a finger inside of her.
Caroline inhaled sharply and closed her eyes for a brief moment before opening them making contact with mine. That which I had been craving to do for so long was now oh so easy and casual. She was mine.
'I want you in there against those tiles, wet inside and out,' I whispered into her ear, barely listening to whatever the hell I just had the audacity to say.
'Shower. Now,' she said commandingly.
I watched as Caroline jumped off the bed and ran briskly into the bathroom, her breasts and buttocks bouncing as she went. Where they went, I followed. That's always been the way of things, and it would be for some time.
I love how these two came to admit to their feelings for each other. Hopefully this is the start of true romance.
Many of the comments on this author seem to be preoccupied with what category the story is in. These people who are so concerned with category might be better off worrying about the qualtiy of the writing, the eroticism of the story and the satisfaction you get from a good plot. I personally couldn't care less about category - I just liked the story. It was somewhat fantastic, but that's what Literotica is all about: fantasy. I kind of liked the idea of a woman who tried to make a bad relationship work finally getting rid of the unfaithful boyfriend and moving on to someone she may well really like if she gave the relationship a chance. I wasn't too thrilled with her idea of making up with a guy and then withholding sex (after a two year relationship), but she wasn't perfect either. I'm left with a beginning of a relationship that does have promise and the overall story has a feel-good quality. 4*
Loved it. Really hot.
And regarding the $200 comment, I wasn't bothered too much by it. I certainly didn't read it as malicious comment, just a stupid faux-pas on his behalf. Although you could've emphasised that more. But I can see where the others are coming from.
Fair comments. Not my best piece of dialogue. I was just trying to write the typical awkward morning-after chit-chat. Clearly I should've reconsidered lines like that.
Hope you enjoyed the story in spite of it.