All Comments on 'From Best Friends to Lovers'

I really enjoyed the story - and just love Elise had the gun ;-)

And I love happy endings :-)

"You stupid goat," I spat at me.

Umm -- who spat at whom ?

Elise grinded her body against me

Arrggh -- the past tense of "grind" is "ground", unless you are writing about Sir Frances Bacon, or discussing sports effort.

I really enjoyed this story it was sexy as hell at the end and sexy too when he pointed the gun at that dumb ass hank. And it made me wet lol.

;)

@anonymous: grinded is an acceptable form of grind in the past tense. I prefer ground, as do you, but at least take the time to check your facts before criticizing something you are getting for free whilst lurking behind the veil of anonymity.

@the_shires: nicely done! It was short, but enjoyable. It would have been nice to know why Maria felt trapped and couldn't leave Hank.

Loved it

I liked it! Sure it had a few problems, but it left me wanting more of these girls, and that's what really matters.

I, too, would like to know why Maria felt trapped with Hank, and how she got there. A followup with Maria getting her stuff back out of Hank's apartment would be good.

The story of a woman who runs from an abusive male into the arms of a seductive female has been told a thousand times already, although I admit you tell it better than most, and it's a story that doesn't really ever get old. Also I am a male so I am visual and need something to go on here. I know some snobby writes will flame you if you say your tits are big and your ass is round, but give me something to go on, just say it more eloquently than me. I am lazy. Pander to my visual needs.

Sequal please, that would be amazing

Well done. Needs a little checking, but well told.

...like most of your work, it's too short. Everything I've read from you has been good, but short. Too short. This story could be fantastic, but you really need to stretch it out, build up a base for your characters and the relationships that they have. The way you're doing it just comes accross as rushed.

But too short :D thank you for sharing them with us.