All Comments on 'From Jenny to Mei Ch. 04'

On so many levels, exploring the character and minds of both these people with understanding and enjoyment. 5 stars and wanting more from you.

I will have to backtrack and reread the earlier chapters again, but this story is so beautiful! More so because I know a few women who act like Jenny/Mei. I also love the psychological aspects of your story. It makes you want to really give yourself a truely hard look in the mirror and see just what is there.

Top-notch writing. Tight to the point. No wasted words. Keep it up. Eroticism at its best.

Still loving this story, the characters are really great - terrible and great - and I definitely want to keep reading :)

I find I am unable to put this down. I am so pleases I checked this story out. Wow.

Another stunning chapter. Mei is clearly starting to accept what Philip has in store for her, and he is showing his human side by struggling with his own desire to take her in every way.

I can't wait to see what kind of woman Mei is going to become in later chapters.

Some of the best character development I've read in many moons.

Thanks!

J

I hope you do read this comment even though it's years since you posted the story.

I am enjoying the story, and I think you are a star with the dialogue.

I hope the many more chapters do lead towards a happy ending, Jenny deserves a true chance, and Philip can surely be the good man in her life....bring safety, pleasure, punishment and Love.

rigid is not ridged.

A riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma. These two characters are complex. Great job developing them, describing their thought processes and, as usual, with the dialogue. When the reader continues to read, the writer has succeeded. On to part 5.