All Comments on 'Fulfilling my Fantasy Ch. 03'

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BarbaraBarbaraalmost 14 years ago
Unrealistic story-line, from a female readers point of view

Strong Pelvic [not Pubic] floor muscles, are to promote female Orgasmic pleasures! Mistaken description of ben-wa balls purpose aside, Barbara's helpless position on parallell bars might make truly gratifying anal or oral sex impossible to achieve? -It would be frustrating for both male or female participant, not allowing inexperienced Master's 'spectator couple' guests to view Barbaras humiliation in comfort? -There would be more entertaining initial positions for sub Barbara to adopt, given his 'BDSM' plot aspirations. Suggest editorial input, before chapter 4 is submitted, from an experienced submissive female writer? This writer's 'female sub' fantasy was unrealistic, at best, Noting your Biography notes, experienced help is available, simply by E/mail in Barbara

BarbaraBarbaraalmost 14 years ago
Mistakes were unacceptable, from a 'submissive female readers viewpoint?

Both my Master and I were impressed by your candid photographic images on your submission biography! We both enjoy submitting our feelings to the opposte sex, regardless of publicly humiliating circumstances.

We feel the chapter 3 submission was hastily written, allowing your readers incorrect impressions of the writer's sexual elation at being put on display to her 'Master's guests. Having been dominated 'BDSM' style by responsible masters myself, your scenario so far proved your inexperience in our view.

EG: A true 'submissive in training' should never be given the choice, to get dressed, then leave a 'Master's house, for any reason! Greeting guests, nude and vulnerable to casual tactile appraisal, is both humiliating and necessary for further multi-entry sexual abuses! Barbara must be willing to accept her anal pleasures from either sex, bound or otherwise? Live penile anal entries have the readers attention immediately, albeit they should sense Barbara's warmth at being anally penetrated though descriptive sighs of satisfaction? Have you climaxed, simply by having male ejaculation deep within the anal passage? You lose all sense of shame taking pride in painful anal entries, by wriggling both your hips against your partners pubic bone, until he cums in your upper colon himself. Thrill your readers, by sharing female experience, only imagined by the average male readers. Your feedback can only improve by blatantly sharing your innermost intimate desire as a submissive woman!

Make all your readers aware that pain & pride coexist, in real life situations?

RSVP , my lovely authoress, from Mistress Barbara Anne Adams NZGSK.

2275jr2275jralmost 14 years ago
barbara having he pussy well fucked tonight

another hot horny part of this awesome story Barbara i can see you will

be getting you pussy fuck by one and all. love this story and the very exciting writing, brilliant keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Waiting

Waiting for chapter 4 this story has me feeling like Barbara. Please write more.

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