All Comments on 'Fulfillment 18'

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bejeweledcatbejeweledcatover 11 years ago
Wow

awesome work. Love where you went, looking forward to where you are going!

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago

I actually liked this chapter, keep it up, it was not jump or confusing and very enjoyable! Thank you!

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago

That should have read not jumpy or confusing but very enjoyable. Duh maybe I need an editor for my comment. Heheheh!

lilwolfspiritlilwolfspiritover 11 years ago
*giggles* excellent chapter

i did enjoy this chapter, especially the end and Em's comment. I definetly had to giggle at Lyssa's "gettin, a bit lesbo back here"....

i always wondered what would happen if a female went into heat and their mate was away from the pack....it makes sense that another female would help in that area, after all the male would kill a man but he wouldn't a female... Sorry rambling on here..excellent chapter.

Keep up the awesome writing!

donna

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 11 years ago

Would have really liked more but I still enjoyed what u gave us. Thanks

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 11 years ago
ha ha!

Sometimes a beta got to do with betas gotta do! I love how this is progressing and thank God Stephanie's finally finding out that she could love again. Good job!

lili82lili82over 11 years ago

I about died laughing at Lyssa's getting a bit lesbo comment! Hope they get a hold of Nathan cuz the way Jo's going at it, Lyssa won't be enough for her!

MizTMizTover 11 years ago
Steph....

is finally coming around for the better. I like her in the role of shy pursuer rather than victim. Her willingness to at least try w/Calvin shows she's not at screwed up as previously thought. As for the rest of the packs things seem to be moving forward. Councils are being formed, Calvin is still searching for a replacement Alpha, and the other packs are doing their part to help make all the packs better. As for Jo, well I can't wait to find out if she's the next to become pregnant. Maybe when all the young girls are done getting knocked up by their mates it will be Lyssa's turn..hint hint..

hakdrakkenhakdrakkenover 11 years ago
Ahh

Both a great chapter and a much needed summary from @MizT, so we all know what we just read. ;-)

But why did they wait so long to have Lyssa make the call? I mean, duh?

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago

Well, that's certainly a new twist. But I want to know who is trying to poison Stephanie!

KittybalooKittybalooover 11 years ago

Woohoo this is certainly getting interesting now. =)

oneboobeeoneboobeeover 11 years ago

I am cracking up laughing......what a friend......lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
thrilled

I have read every one of your related chapters....love them all. Can't wait for more. Love them all.

vivavixenvivavixenover 11 years ago

Loved it. I think you're the first author in the werewolf category that's done and girl/girl that I've seen. I'm smiling so much right now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh i want to know how this is going to finish.......PLEASE??????????????

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