All Comments on 'Full Moon Madness Ch. 01'

Good start, time now to bring the twins' parents in for a full taboo family orgy

Well written and the dialogue is good. Setting up the characters and story is important and you've done a good job, so I'm hoping that things will get a little racier in the next chapter.

Nice set up. I usually don't like twins stories, but you've done very weel by making it a bisexual story for the brothers and sisters as well.

I look forward till when the moon is full!

Keep up the nice work

Very nice start. You've given the characters some depth. I can't wait to see what you do with them now.

Excellent writing skills. Begins a story exceedingly well.

BUT, so brief; so unfinished that not one of over 63 thousand readers was willing to vote.

Why? Too well written to give a bad score, and to unfinished to deserve a good score.

Do you really think 63,000 + readers are all wrong.

Suggestion: Finish the story and have devoted fans.

Or, SULK.