All Comments on 'Full Moon Madness Ch. 01'

Excellent writing skills. Begins a story exceedingly well.

BUT, so brief; so unfinished that not one of over 63 thousand readers was willing to vote.

Why? Too well written to give a bad score, and to unfinished to deserve a good score.

Do you really think 63,000 + readers are all wrong.

Suggestion: Finish the story and have devoted fans.

Or, SULK.

Very nice start. You've given the characters some depth. I can't wait to see what you do with them now.

Nice set up. I usually don't like twins stories, but you've done very weel by making it a bisexual story for the brothers and sisters as well.

I look forward till when the moon is full!

Keep up the nice work

Well written and the dialogue is good. Setting up the characters and story is important and you've done a good job, so I'm hoping that things will get a little racier in the next chapter.

Good start, time now to bring the twins' parents in for a full taboo family orgy