All Comments on 'Full-Time Mom Part-Time Slut Ch. 02'

Dreams from a man who can't have his own woman...So he dreams....

Dreams or not I enjoyed these two storys. I'm not a fan of anal, but what the hell??

This guy is a "Macho Mike", & I wonder where all the experience came from. Maybe that niece is not just a name in here. Closer to his age, & cognicent of his leanings. I hope next story involves, a little incest. Need a discription of the cousin, & her little girl,Humm?? I happen to like fucking my cousins.

Thanks for a nice read.

"Use them," to indicate dialogue.

Still live at home I'll bet?

The writing style was unique, very believable, had a tinge of misogyny in his approach. However, who of us as a young man didnt view the fairer sex as an object of pleasure for ourselves? I would like to see more from this author.

True as the flat earth. You can't be a.part time slut when you're a full time whore.

I liked it. A true Loving Wives story. Plenty of sex with a wife.

You had the makings of an interesting and flexible plot. But your writing is spoiled by your very poor writing style. Written language is quite distinct from spoken language. This important stylistic difference is the result of the limitations of the written word -- writing cannot easily (if at all) capture the unique effects of spoken language: volume, cadence, emphasis using changes in volume and cadence, pauses for emphasis, the addition of non-verbal facial and body gestures, etc., etc., Punctuation symbols can only suggest a little of the subtiltes and control of that are easily available in speaking but difficult to reproduce in writing. If you're serious about your writing, I suggest you at least start educating yourself by studying good writing. Books. Good magazines. etc.