All Comments on 'Fun in Paris'

I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall in that hotel. I envy you, Rob. Perhaps next time you go to Paris, though, you should go for a two-bedded room, and I could join you, sharing the bed with each girl in turn.

This was a pretty good story. Unlike many other stories of its type, one can believe that it could have happened this way. The incremental, and careful way the characters approached the final decision to participate in the menage..., conscious always of the risks this plced on their relationships with each other struck me as true-to-life.

the plot was just fine to make a good story, but this story moved way too slow. very tedious. i understand the hesitation by your characters when trying something new and exciting.but trying to describe this too much in this short story became boring to read.i had to fight to finish the story.

don

This was not great, it was outstanding. I'm glad you took the time to make it erotic and sexy instead of just another stroke story. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Not much fun for the wife. The friend and hubby get to screw each other and cum and the wife gets a pair of fingers up her. Up you too if you think thats fun.

Thank you very much for such a descriptive and sexy story. The pace and detail was perfect. I look forward to reading the next one!

Kinda slow moving, but as was said previously, realistic. The 3-some was good. What I had a problem with was the wife getting together with Jen and hiding it from her husband. In the restaurant she decided that she was going to do it again and that it was to special to share with her husband. In my book that's cheating. She now is having a relationship that is secret and seperate from her spouse, how is that different than her having an affair with another man? They had discussed how much the spouses loved each other, what a special marriage they had and how they never wanted anything to hurt the marriage, yet the girls now have an ongoing sexual relationship that the husband knows nothing about. How can that not hurt the marriage? I see pain, hurt and divorce in the future for this couple. If only she had been honest.

So well told, a tale of three people coming together for a beautiful night. Please continue the story. I am intrigued to know how the characters continue this relationship.

Just as trashy as husband giving wife to best friend. In this story wife is the pimp.

One of the hottest story I've read in a long time up til the end when he said he wanted to watch another man cum in her. I know it's hypocritical but it's just the way I'm wired. It killed. it for me.