All Comments on 'Fun with the Folks Next Door Ch. 02'

by daveball500

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BrungBrungalmost 17 years ago
Great

Very horny, thanks. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Consistency

Good writing but the two chapters don't fit together in several ways. Will look for the next one tho...hope he gets to pound Pamela!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Excellent writing

An excellent story, especially the second chapter which seems to be somewhat ambivalently related to the first chapter. That's not necessarily a bad thing as I'm really stoked to see what comes next! Nice to find a hint of seminal male bonding as well.

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