All Comments on 'Furniture'

you had this wonderful build up to everything that could possibly happen, and then you don't describe a thing!

What did they do? I got all worked up to know what happened... then nothing...

that was rubbish so rubbish in fact i actually lost my boner

Yes, more sexual details (and acts) would have been nice, but the psychology involved here is also quite important to truly appreciate this story.

Great buildup but it seems as though the author ran out of imagination. The story sucked.

Well done. Works the mind and not the body.

The only problem I see is that you went too far. You should have left us in the living room while she desended into the dark and to her 'fate'.

This could be exspanded into a novela or even into a full fledged novel, at which point some details of what goes on down stairs would be a good thing. The characters have an appeal to them, which may be why some were disappointed.

And I would leave the Caps/ no caps protocol in the chat rooms. It is out of place here.

If not for those two points I would have given you a 100.

That was certainly a mind f*ck ... I must admit it was a delicious twist to your usually very involved writings ... Thank you Sir