by Lion24655
A great story. Looking forward to reading about the daughters. The anal with the husband was a little unrealistic but nice work regardless.
you had had the wrong name Tom instead of Tony way to many times which threw off the enjoyment of reading it every time it happened. Hopefully chapter 2 has been proof read a few times before it was published, otherwise I won't even bother reading it through the end.
You are fantastic writer!!!!!!!! I love your stories!!!!!!!!! Love to talk with you .
Bi47 - You are fantastic writer!!!!!!!! I love your stories!!!!!!!!! WTF?
The story seemed like it was written by a 12 Yr old.
Tony became Tom too many times to be from a fantastic writer!!!!
Should have called Tom Bob then you wouldn't have been so confused.
Very poor effort!!!!