All Comments on 'Gargouille Ch. 02'

I hope u continue the story

This story is awesome. I truly love the feel, flow, detail, and the development of the characters in the story. I know you just updated but I can't wait for update, and when they all going to meet. I'm fixed :) on the story. All I got to say is more please and soon.

thank you for the read.

Shanee

Looking forward to chapter three.

Five.

I was so shocked to see a 2 nd chapter. Please continue this story, I really enjoy reading it.

I like the story so far but from chapter 01 to 02 nothing much is happening, i.e. no new developments. Either you make the chapters longer or you try to pack more action into each. With the amount of time between each new chapter this story will take forever and you are going to lose readers who simply can´t and won´t wait. Otherwise nice storyline.

I like the way you didnt so much as change bunny but revamp her. Lookin good, please keep the chapters comin.

lm totally in the zone of the story. you got some thing good going. keep it up and i cant wait for the next chapter. well done

update please. i do love this story.

Merry..I just love your writing style. The whole two men and one woman is my kind of thing. This is a great story line. I can envision lots of excitement for Nicole and the men.

That train scene was hilarious...granny is too much.

Just started reading..of to get some white rum..yeah!!

Re-reading this story and just finished chap 2. I really like this story and hope merry update before i finish chp 4.

I think this chapter,along with chapter 5 is really good.

It is taking too much time for things to happen: nothing significant happened in this 2nd chapter, just rehas of the 1st. And what was the point of that Bronin stuff? Also what take so much time to explain in length Nicole's arrival from Jamaica and her car's stuff? be careful not to delay to much in order to tease because it is just annoying at some point....

Clearly, there are two entirely separate storylines taking place at the moment. I am interested to see how their paths will converge. I like how you're unfolding the story, so far. 👌