All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles - Gemini Ch. 03'

Its not a bad stroke story... but the original genie chronicles was more.. it told a story' it wasnt just stumbling from one sex scene to the next... and i think the genie there had a deeper personality...

Dear readers,

thank you for reading, as I've mentioned in previous comments a prologue is coming, it's just waiting for approval now.

I also feel the need to address an issue I can see arising.

Some of my stories are pure sex, I love writing story and plot and beefing out characters and expanding a world but I think to not occasionally write a story that is just about the sex sort of misses the point of writing erotic fiction in the first place.

Additionally chapters 1-5 were basically written in single burst, I wasn't sure where I was going all I knew was I wanted to go there, BUT please stick with it at least until chapter 6, I've just uploaded that tonight, it may take a couple of weeks to be approved and it's one that I loved writing and sets stuff up magnificently for the future.

Another great chapter

I'm loving it so far the sex and the parts without sex lol, even if u had a chapter without any sex in it this is really good and the relationship between them is romantic. Only thing i am wondering on is that his age isn't mentioned or about his background a little more, i am sure we will be learning more and more about his genies personalities as we go on. As with the other chapters great story keep it up

Please keep goin ive read every genie story so far since the first chronicle and not a single one finishes their story feel like this series is cursed or sumthin

I read you can beef up the stories, make it longer and more indepth.. These one page teasers can be frustrating, All in all, it is a great story and you are doing great. Keep at it..