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All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles - Gemini Ch. 05'

by BarbarianLover

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mBrowmBrowover 10 years ago
Great story series

Enjoying your serial romp! Thanks, BarbarianLover!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
my only complaint...

...is that the chapters are so short now. Otherwise, it's a great story. Keep the chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Working the beautiful fantasy

It may be mainly the UK setting, but I don't feel the background, and the character development is less than the Brolly chronicles,.. but possibly the double time spent on the sex scenes just slows it down a bit,.. still pretty good,.. I would have finished the girls new ID's before going out on the town, but I am a stick in the mud and way past 25 years old,.. so I will finish this series,.. and so far so good!!!

MarkT63MarkT63about 2 years ago

Still going strong...

tinfoilhattinfoilhat7 months ago

1 page chapters suck. This could be so much more. But I'm not the author. I really like this story.

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After six years of not doing much having had various issues personal, professional, financial and so forth I am now writing again, have been for two weeks, nearly three. Genie Chronicles Gemini II is still in very early stages although I've written paragraph for that today wh...