All Comments on 'Genuine Ch. 01'

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Kye46Kye46over 8 years ago
I Love It !!

I know it's been years but I just found it ! And I really liked the start of your story!!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieabout 10 years ago
Good beginning!

Do you plan on writing more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good start.

This is so very promising. Looking forward to the next chapter.

-Jaz

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 12 years ago
Beautiful

start thus far...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dayum!

I Loved it! I'm hooked! I too want more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'm hooked!

Want more (giggle)

greenbeegreenbeeover 16 years agoAuthor
I mean it will be really soon!

I've submitted it.

greenbeegreenbeeover 16 years agoAuthor
As the author of this story...

...and a black woman myself, let me just say that there are a lot of black women (like myself) who are attracted to men of all races. Now that that's out of the way...

second chapter's up guys!!!

~Green :)

JonB1969JonB1969over 16 years ago
wish there was more!!

Loved the way it started out ..... and groaned when I got to the end!! Either take it down, or write chapter 2 ... and as for the previous poster who says black girls dont like white guys .... if that were true, why do we have an interracial section??

BrownsugargoddessBrownsugargoddessover 16 years ago
Great beginning

I love how you captured each character....giving them there own secert lust for each other...i cant wait to read more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
fabulous story-line

i do find myself more attracted to an intelligent, well-dressed caucasian than to a thugged out black boy pretending to be a man.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
love it

dark skinned women always fascinated me. they are very sexy. and those curves...wow. instant hard on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOT & REALISTIC

I LOVE YOUR STORY & IM WAITING IN SUSPENCE FOR MORE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Definitely not true!

I'm a (young) black woman, and I date outside of my race. In fact, I tend to be more attracted to men outside of my race, and there are many other people who feel the same way that I do. So, how about you grow up, pull your head out of the ground and pretend to have a few brain cells?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
trash

be real, this is garbage, black women dont like white boys

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Start!

i can't wait to see what developes with these two!!! good job and keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice beginning . . .

You say you like to write, yet you wrote so little. And still that little was so very hot, romantic and full of promise! Keep up the good work, always leaving us wanting more!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Wonderful story!

Laura is intrigued by a big tipper. A most satisfying story of a white man and a black woman. I loved the way this Writer described her capturing her appearance. Very sensuous and Hot!

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