by Softly
WOW - What a great story You have to do a second ,thrid ,fourth chapter- the possiblites are endless!!!!
Horny Hubby
A great premise! Potential unlimited!! More detail. Demi's turn or Scarlet Johanson.
do a sequal using stars like Doris Day, June ALLISON, Jane Fonda, Janet Leigh etc. These were our stars in the past.64a
revenge is best served cold. continue on. get the judge also.
You had a wonderful plot, and used only a third of possibilities. You must write a sequel.