All Comments on 'Georgia, Luke and Nellie Ch. 01'

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KiayhaKiayhaalmost 14 years ago
Loved it!

I love master/slave stories, but it's hard to find ones that are well written and demonstrate an erotic relationship between both characters that wasn't degrading to the slave. The sex scenes were definitely hot and I can't wait for more!Love his possessiveness as well and I hope Georgia keels off from being such a fucking prude and dies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Well, sorta nice but ended so so

dud ending. left me hanging, what happen to wife, did luke protect nellie, did georgia and nellie get pregnant. unanswered questions

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
*****

Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Impressive, and plausible

Very nice job of storytelling. I'm sure some will react negatively because slavery is involved, but something like this could have happened, and probably did somewhere along the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Forget the haters

This story is hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
did you steal this story?

i enjoyed your story but it sounds alittle to familiar to a story by blackbish named nellie's new master, at first i thought it was the other way around and that she stole your story being that yours is longer, but her story was submitted in 01.

but besides that. i really did enjoy the story. but if you did steal it. i think you should do a better job of coming up with your own ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
you all are sick

I could not stomach this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ok

This is just disgusting omg

Ashlee1996Ashlee1996over 11 years ago
Nice

Lol I enjoyed this chapter. Was quite interesting and a lil hot if I might add hehe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Loved it! Can't wait to read more

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