All Comments on 'Georgia, Luke and Nellie Ch. 02'
by ratedr22
- 14 Comments
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoThis chapter got kinkier than I expected, but it was well done, I must say.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI was with you all the way until the end! Why in the hell would a dude with such a rapacious temper all of sudden just let bygones be bygones and everyone just starts spontaneously fuck like nothing untoward had happened before? He would have at least paid his wife back for fucking with him in the first place! He would have revenge fucked her in the ass! Remember, he owed her one!
ratedr22almost 14 years agoAuthorHa ha Anonymous. I agree. That part was kind of lame. I revised it actually (cause there is a third and final chapter) and changed that bit, so Georgia keeps lying about everything, but I don't know when I will finish it. I am so stressed it is hard to get in the mood... But thanks for reading. I know it was long. I can't help it, I love writing.
tsykes2005over 13 years agomaybe you need to go through all the tags first, this belongs in interacial erotic, not this.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThis is a genre I've been seeking fir awhile now. Do keep it up.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWhether this is the true ending or an "alternate" ending, I think it works just fine. Yes, there's a crueler route this could've gone but you're such a talented writer, you can make anything work.
One thing's for sure though: DON'T. STOP. WRITING.
This is simply brilliant and I'm glad I didn't miss it. The characters were all believable and their actions were in keeping with their established personas. I could go on forever about the ways this story worked but suffice it to say, well done.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis whole series was really good it got me so horny u shud make more like it
Anonymousover 5 years agoMay your thoughts become your reality in reverse. #TunBoj
