All Comments on 'Getting Away from It All Ch. 01'

More and more rarely, you can read so natural and NORMAL story.

- Without the "shaved" and "smooth".. Without starting from "in the mouth and suck" - and without the so-called: - "sex" in the anus.

Big applause for the author! - I hope it will be more such, in this way writing..

Excellent story telling. Please keep up the efforts. It is very easy reading and feels like watching a naturally evolving plot line.

shame she is not his real mom, u should have waited till end, before telling us the truth 4/5

it's about time for chapter 2 , really enjoyed 1st chapter can't wait to find out it's twins and all the gold they found they'll be able to have a 6 bed mansion?

I agree with the guy who said it's nice to read a story more about a natural woman and, how she's naturally beautiful, sexy, and desirable without all the trendy Pro Ho gibbledy goolosh about slick, shaved pussies, stupid dick sucking to get going, or sticking a dick up a woman's shit hole... Real men love and, are attracted to natural women just like the great Creator designed them in the first place and, mere humans shouldn't be tampering or, arguing with that Master Plan... I hate this new slick pussy trend mature women have fallen prey and, bought in to... I'm certain it was all started by none other than men's latent, teeny-bopper, pedo fantasies... You keep writing about the real natural jewels of the biological universe; natural women... 5/5

The author wrote an all around good story.

and quite complete just as it is. adding anything else would just take them into a survivalist mode. I would be perfectly content to read another story about another couple discovering themselves. But that is why I am a reader, not a writer, I guess.

please continue this story

The story was going so good until the step-mother reveal. Good story otherwise.

It WAS and still IS a GREAT story! WANT MORE!

You need to at least give us a chapter 2 to update us on what happened with the gold and if she got pregnant ?

5 stars and keep up the good writing.

I'm glad I saw this and read it. I loved the twist with that not being Keith's actual mom--and especially that you made her Native American! I don't know if you included it in Ch 2, but it would prove interesting to know what tribe she was from and if they had any particular legends or information to help Keith become an even better mountain man.

Only thing I thought out of sync with it all was her mentioning her measurements to him before he climbed into bed with her. He was already smitten, so I don't think after him seeing the pics that he didn't suspect she was well-built...so those measurements were out of place and not needed. Aside from that, not a bump in your story that I read, and it had a good flow. 5

They will need a generator to provide power.

A very yummy story! Thank you!

Wow! What a wonderful "feeling" story. I'm anxious to get on to the next chapter.

I'm afraid I rather lost interest after that revelation. It's no good if it ain't blood.

Lovely story. Love it. AAAAA++++