by sexybeast16
I would like to see where you go from here. Please continue because I would like to here more about Gabby and Jason...
keep going, I so want to see what happens next with Grace, I already know it won't be anything good, for some reason I see Gabby kicking someones ass over Jason lol.
It's always good to see another potentially good IR story on Literotica !
Don't be one of those annoying writers that write an amazing first chapter and then never finish it. This story has the potential to be #1 on the IR Toplist. Dig deep. You CAN do it.
I'm very intrigued with your first chapter. Looking forward to where you take these characters.
I love this story, Please let us know what happens, and how the relationshp end's up. Great start to a book if you ask me!
It really does have a lot of potential....so don't leave us hanging and let us find out what happens next!
you should continue this. It is a great start, will be disappointed if you don't continue.